Randy L. Heard
COMM/215
January 13, 2012
Mr. De Veto
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Reviewer question: What is the causations thesis?
Due to the lack of kosher planning, meter management, and proper supervision; ABC, Inc was unsuccessful at holding their impudent hire orientation. In this case study analysis, I go out give you some recommendations to possibly ensure that this never happens again in the future. I also noticed that there was an gratuitous coma after ABC and no period after Inc.
Reviewer question: Is the thesis clearly stated? If not, how would you encourage the writer restate it? No the thesis is not as clear as it could be.
There could be a brusque more information. I would preview a little more about what will be discussed in the case study.
Writer question: arguing the transmits made based on this feedback. excessively list those suggestions that were offered hardly that you did not make, and explain why you did not make the suggestions.
The goal of this case study is to show how proper supervision, time management and proper planning are the cornerstones to having a successful new hire orientation.
I decided to change my thesis, due to the lack of information, I should have told my audience what the purpose of my case study was..
Reviewer question: Does the essays body stick to the of import topic? If not, where does it digress, and how could the writer retool the paper to make it stay more on the main topic?
I think he did a not bad(p) job on sticking to the main topic. He had a good summery of the background, key problems, alternatives, proposed solutions and recommendations.
Writer question: List the changes made based on this feedback. Also list those suggestions that were offered but that you did not make, and explain why you did not make the suggested changes.
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